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Lift your eyes.

Reach out your hand over borderlands and oceans.

Rest your hand in mine.

I love you through black and white postcards and back again.



Turn over the songs written before we were born

In the shadows built before our city had a name.

Put your lips to mine.

I love you through circuses and flowering cherries, I do.



An instant that never had to sign its name in tippex

A kiss that needed no key grip or gaffer

To brand itself into our hereafter.

I love you through tears and Roman candles, my only.



I have felt the day break around us

I've known the capturing ascent of your touch, your breath an absolution on my cheek.

I remember the sky that was here before you came.

Press your heart to mine.

I love you so much I don't know if you're beautiful.
©2006-2009 ~LazyLinePainterJohn
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:

Author's Comments

This six-week-old poem is gauche and flimsy, but it's from the heart. And I do like the 'breath an absolution' line. This is what it looks like when I get all fuzzy inside.

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:iconcaptainoscillator:
Three resons that it is worthwhile watching you.
1- I love you through black and white postcards and back again.
2- your breath an absolution on my cheek.
3- I love you so much I don't know if you're beautiful.

Thankyou for another beautiful poem, these always make smile. :hug:

--
"Lord what fools these mortals be."
Yep, Vampires...cool.
:iconcaptainoscillator:
And omg, how did I manage to get the first comment?

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"Lord what fools these mortals be."
Yep, Vampires...cool.
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:
Thanks very much; I'm glad you like it. Number 3 I fear is nicked from somewhere, but I'm not certain where and I don't want to find out in case I'm right, filthy plagiarist, I. Thanks again for your praise.
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:
Probably because this is a scrap. One comment is a lot for my scraps.
:iconcza24-9:
this rings so true! thanks for recreating a beautiful emotion...

--
"I paid for my indecision with interest,
wandering in the untouched forest
and listening alone to the pine-needles."
-- Yevtushenko [from Zima Junction]
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:
Glad you liked it, thank you.

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