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There should be a poem for every girl
with black hair and black eyes
who's sat across the aisle on a crowded train
and written pointless beautiful things
in the notebook in her lap.
I might write my name and number on a bit of paper
Drop it on your page as I'm getting off.
But I prefer to think it and write it than to know
What might happen if I actually did.
I'm sorry I've been staring. But you see
I fall in love easily and often
and I find more life in never-met imaginary trysts
than the close-to imperfections of what's real.
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Comments
this is beautiful.
"and written pointless beautiful things
in the notebook in her lap"
"I fall in love easily and often"
my favorite parts
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Breathe-in experience,
breathe-out poetry.
--Muriel Rukeyser
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Life is more than breathing in and out
~M
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I agree with one of the other commentors: I think the poem is complete with <i>"What might happen if I actually did."</i> To be honest, my favorite part is the entire first stanza, and I could see that as a whole, complete poem by itself.
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