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    Indie boys and girls who lack the basic wit to just admit

                  they can't articulate their isolation.

   Still they rise above the hordes who haven't time for minor chords

                 they pray to Zane Lowe for a revelation.




   Scenesters and suburbanites who stroll the city wrapped up tight

                  against its cold and spiteful sense of purpose.

   Whimsy and ironic laughs, and corduroy, and chiffon scarfs

                  are no defence against the urban circus.




   World-weary adolescents hopeful for antidepressants

                 it would beat pretending to read Nietzsche.

   Nihilistic rage is cool, it's better than straight A's in school

                 but girlfriends and admirers still don't feature.




   Hipsters in the hip cafes, they slip the hip-words of today

                  check their berets, and order one more latte.

   Opposite the mirror they sit and stroke their beards and take a sip

                  and wish they'd been invited to a par-tay.




   Awkward kids from Methody, they pine and long for entropy

                  and in the NME they find escape routes.

   Razorlight won't keep you safe from bigger kids who pick on waifs

                 The Dilinger Escape Plan can't escape brutes.




   Fashionistas, hair just-so, fake tans applied and off they go

                  to mingle amalayse with perfect strangers.

   In the club they're ankle deep in broken glass, the drinks are steep

                  they let the beat inure them to the dangers.




   Ostentatious art-rock lovers buy their clothes from album covers

                  saturnine and diffident and nervous.

   Jeered at by the demimonde who'd misinterpret Blonde on Blonde

                  keep walking and pretend to be impervious.




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©2005-2009 ~LazyLinePainterJohn
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Author's Comments

The first and third lines have been around for ages. I finally pushed them into something approaching poetry this week. This isn't really a poem, more nine standalone stanzas about studenty stereotypes. I didn't mean to use alliteration there. I hope some of them at least seem familiar. Most of them I had someone I know in mind; one of them is quite closely based on me. (Hint: it's not number eight.) Methody is a school in Belfast I didn't attend.

Latest EDIT: Two of these weren't pulling their weight, and some early lines didn't scan that well.

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:iconmacdoherty:
"Indie boys and girls who lack the wherewithal to admit

they can't articulate their sense of isolation.

Still they rise above the hordes who haven't time for minor chords

they pray to Zane Lowe for a revelation.


I LOVE this. Violently so. It's all so familiar, but so beautifully done. It's wonderful.
:iconhoverlight:
I REALLY enjoyed reading this - the perfect collegeiate stereotypes - I recognize many of them and can identify myself with a few. I really love the structure of the poem as well - some of the rhymes are just brilliant!

I especially like the second stanza.

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"Beware, lest in fighting the dragon you become the dragon"
:iconephemeralfemininity:
this definately deserves a fav!

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God never give us more than we can handle, but I think he assumes I'm stronger than what I really am.
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:
Thanks -- do you think I ought to cut no.6? I'm beginning to dislike it.
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:
Thanks a lot! Yeah, a lot of these cut rather near my own bones. Thanks for liking the structure too, I was quite pleased with it. Not for the first time, this started as a re-working of a Glaswegian indie lyric.
:iconlazylinepainterjohn:
It could be familiar 'cos it's basically all reworkings of If You're Feeling Sinister. Thanks for liking / fav-ing this, I appreciate it. I think I can do more with this some time. The movie society might need one or two representatives. Maybe I should start by cutting stanza 6...
:iconephemeralfemininity:
I dunno, six works in its own weird way, but it is a little weird.

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God never give us more than we can handle, but I think he assumes I'm stronger than what I really am.
:icontangled-up-in-blue:
Ostentatious art-rock lovers buy their clothes from album covers

saturnine and diffident and nervous.

Jeered at by the demimonde who'd misinterpret Blonde on Blonde

keep walking and pretend to be impervious.




--my favorite.

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