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"Carry a torch for me, keep safe a taper"
she whispered so quietly into his ear.
Maybe too quietly. Eighteen months later
He made her a gift of a full-grown tapir.
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. "Carry a torch for me, keep safe a taper" she whispered so quietly into his ear. Maybe too quietly. Eighteen months later He made her a gift of a full-grown tapir. . |
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Can you spare a bullet, señorita?
lol
I quite like this. Thank you!
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"It's 106 miles to Chicago, we've got a full tank of gas, a half pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses."
"Let's hit it!"
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under oblivious eyes, the invisible autographed the world.
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"Lord what fools these mortals be."
Yep, Vampires...cool.
We need to catch up, my friend.
I wanted to read this the minute I saw the title, and I enjoyed every inch of the poem.
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sorry no critique ... just a splendid job on this!
"But I love this, and I want you all to like it" ... ummm, is it fine then if we love it instead?
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